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©2008-2009 =Zerossoul
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Alright! it's finally done! Man! this is one of the coolest things I've done in a long time! Very proud of this pic! Please leave comments and stuff, I really would like to know what you think!

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:iconlbgrover:
Vision: I rate this a just because the position of the legs seen just slightly misalligned but your detail is fantastic

Originallity: From what I have seen your work appears very original

Technique: Great movement and placement of work within area- use of space is great and not borning- your items could use to have more depth like shadows on the keys and you manga character. Your choice for font is difficult to read (cursive fonts are fun, however as a publisher the are usually not the best choice)

Impact: Over all your work has impact, motiion made with emotion, I can feel when I look at your work. Art is meant to provoke and have an emotion impact.
mprove just minor things add shadows on edges/sides of things also behind him would be great with add more depth to an inspiring work. Remember theses are just my opinion- beleive me everyone has an opinion do not often share or take the time to share. Your work inspired me to look and take time to see what you had there.

LBGrover :)
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:iconoupazas:
AWESOME!!!! All your colors and shineyness and background and textures=WIN.

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"How about a magic trick? I'm going to make this pencil disappear..." THWACK!

Roses are red, violets are VIOLET, YOU COLORBLIND FREAK.
:iconzerossoul:
I thought it was good to, so I made it a print and purchased a mouse pad!

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"I Dare you to move"
"Beautiful is a word that is used when you run out of metaphors."
:icongirldirtbiker:
luv the way the metal looks! the background colors really tie everything together good to!:D

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there's not enough laughter and happiness in the world anymore..so i hope to bring smiles wherever i go:D
:iconzerossoul:
Thanks

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"I Dare you to move"
"Beautiful is a word that is used when you run out of metaphors."
:iconz176:
wow, Great coloring!
:iconzerossoul:
Thanks!

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"I Dare you to move"
"Beautiful is a word that is used when you run out of metaphors."
:icontokiyaensui:
either his straight leg or his torso is twisted

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"I just don't want to die without a few scars."

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October 19, 2008
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